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My goal is to put paragraphs into my writing
I used traffic light to help me. A traffic light is green orange and red. Green is a topic sentence for example: once upon a time lived a boy/girl. Orange is details for example:the girl has blue hair .Red is closing sentence for example: to la.. ZAP.
Can you see any confusing paragraphs?
Hi Fern. I read this story and thought the traffic lights were a very clever way to create your paragraphs. Great job!
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