Tuesday 13 October 2015

My Neighbour

To my family 67HQ wrote a set of criteria. We had to write a piece of writing to follow the criteria. We want us to have loads of comments on our blogs. My goal is to use paragraphs to organise my writing. Do you think I should change my goal or keep working on my goal? Have I worked on my goal enough? I cant wait to read your comments!
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  1. Anonymous15 October 2015 at 13:35

    Fern I really enjoyed reading this story. It made me giggle in some places, very humorous. I love the different ways people say things, for example, screamed, exclaimed. I think you have done an amazing job with your paragraphs. It really helps to make the story more structured and it makes sense. I think you have done very well with your goal.

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